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SHHH, IT’S THE… QUERY WHISPERER

OH, THE QUERY LETTER…

Has spellchecking ever worked its backwards black magic and corrected you into misspelled words and unintended meanings?

Is your plot summary still refusing to cooperate?

Are your characters not grabbing the agent by the hand?

What DOES that ideal literary agent want to see in your query, anyway?

And the bio… Oy, the bio!

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Let me speak to your query letter—I’ll be firm but kind.

Having learned the long and hard way as a writer/translator/editor/proofreader for 20+ years,

I’m excited to now downsize my editing to…

QUERY CRITIQUES ONLY!

FAQs

  • Are you a bot?

I am not.

  • Will you rewrite my query?

No, but I will thoroughly and thoughtfully guide your revisions in a 1-page critique or using Track Changes.

  • What’s your turn-around time?

Often same-day. Depending on workload, at most 3 days.

  • What does it cost?

– 1 edit – $95.USD

– 1 edit + answers to 3 follow-up questions from you – $130.USD

– 1 edit + 1 review of your new draft – $175.US

  • More about you?

– https://laughinginthelanguage.com/

– https://linktr.ee/AnnelieseS

– https://www.facebook.com/aschultzauthor/

– www.linkedin.com/in/anneliese-schultz

  • How do I contact you?

– aschultz@mail.ubc.ca (state Query Critique Request in RE: line)

For more info, see my Query Whisperer page on this website – https://laughinginthelanguage.com/query-whisperer-for-writers-only/

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FAKE NEWS, ALTERNATE REALITIES, & SELF-DOUBT – HOW A LONG-LOST REJECTION LETTER ROCKED MY SOCKS OFF

 

For 3 years, I’ve been spending 6-8 weeks at home, 3 days on the train, 6-8 weeks across the border with my mom, 3 days back on the train… And repeat. I’m so fortunate to still have Mom to read old family letters in German to, to have 2:00 brunch and play MadLibs with, to share the odd wry comment or giggle.

It’s quite a switch from her house to mine, and every time I get home, the forest of books and undergrowth of paper/s seems to be, well, flourishing. This last time, it was suddenly too much.

Within 12 hours of getting back, I’m clearing off shelves and emptying drawers; inspecting one note or form or clipping at a time; determinedly filling the recycling bag. Until I find this:

 

Okay, wait—

This was the Enizagam Fiction Contest.

2013.

Fiction Judge Sarah Shun-lien Bynum.

I submitted my story Child.

Child WON that contest.

It was published in the next issue of Enizagam.

I was there in Oakland to read at the launch.

(I have a photo—I can prove it!)

I take a deep breath and read the letter again. ???

Maybe… as we leave years and layers of documents to their own devices, they begin to get seriously bored? Start joking around with each other? Come up with alternate versions of reality, parallel possibilities, some good old fake news?

I mean, I won, yes?

I DID.

Reading the letter to my son now, I’m beginning to veer ever so slightly off base: “You remember when I won, right? You read the story. Remember how… I mean, look, the issue’s right here on the bookcase with my other publications!”

Um. The issue’s not there.

For a moment, I really do believe in an alternate universe where:

Child went unrecognized.

I was advised to try again.

(Maybe I was kidding myself.)

(Maybe none of my writing was any good.)

(Maybe I wasn’t even a writer.)

Doubt. A growing dizziness. In self-defense, I go to bed.

*  *  *

Middle-of-the-night realization, verified early the next morning:

Of course—I submitted 2 stories to that particular contest.

 

 Rent Asunder was, in that disconcerting letter, the one enjoyed but not accepted.

Child made it.

Reality rules.